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Here I sit just lost in my mind
wondering just what it would be like
To hold you, to touch you
to know you
You'd never see me in a crowded room
would never even catch your eye
But here I am
with a head full of dreams
and a heart full of emotion
That I'll just never understand
If I could only reach out
and brush this hand upon your flesh
Would you feel it?
would you even notice I'm alive?
Or would you simply feel a flutter
and nothing more?
Even if I could permeate a radiant glow
You wouldn't notice
I'd remain in these shadows
Solitaire in my mournful cries
My tears unnoticed
My heart a shameless relic
No, you'd never feel this love
You'd never know this tide of
emotion
I'll keep it in my bottle
I'll keep it hidden safe away
And in the shadows remain
©2003-2010 ~drkangl
:icondrkangl:

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:icondulcinea:
Wow...great job. I love it, and have felt this same way before. Fave, definitely.
:icondrkangl:
Thank you so much ^.^
:icononegurlrevolution:
Awesome--very good :)


:heart:--Mothers weep, children sleep So much violence ends in silence It's a shame there's no one 2 blame For all the pain that life brings If u will just take me It might just complete me
And together we can make a stand--:heart:
:iconchainsaw-jky:
i can relate to this feeling all too well. love is nothing if it doesn't work both ways.

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Numbed by excess and complete saturation... Scarred influence by degeneration
Lost innocence and blank revelations...Searching for hope in static transmissions

- Fear Factory
:iconpsychoticchic69:
perfectly relating to this poem... its simple, yet holds so much emotion!!!!!!!!

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crooked hands shall ne'er kiss the sweetest satins within the minds of innocence
:iconpipesmokingpoet:
Long dark months of the soul... Thanks for expressing for my thoughts.
:iconrishikaa:
byootiful :)
i love the last bit

--
Rishika
I'm outside-in, so turn me inside-out
Watch my fall, See my colour, Accept my person
:iconkayugakimimaru:
That's quite a poem, It's such a briliant emotive piece of work and I can really relate to it.



-favs-

--
The beautiful and japanese world of naruto belongs to the great Masashi Kishimoto

All hail him ^^

I love the holy trinity, and thankyou God for making our world :)

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